Comments on: You Tell Me Why Not, Part 2 (Director’s Bio) http://www.comstockfilms.com/blog/tony/2007/05/15/you-tell-me-why-not-part-2-directors-bio/ Real Talk About Making Real Sex Erotic Documentaries Fri, 09 Jan 2009 01:36:17 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc By: Ms Naughty http://www.comstockfilms.com/blog/tony/2007/05/15/you-tell-me-why-not-part-2-directors-bio/#comment-52673 Ms Naughty Wed, 16 May 2007 01:09:36 +0000 http://www.comstockfilms.com/blog/tony/2007/05/15/you-tell-me-why-not-part-2-directors-bio/#comment-52673 Tony, who is this biography for? Where will it appear? Because I think if it's going to be distributed to the general public then you need to cut back on the technical detail. Also, I would leave out the bit about indifferent responses to Marie and Jack and concentrate on the positives. Also, perhaps you need a couple of paragraphs at the start about who you are, not just what you do. What's your background, where do you live? Just some quick thoughts. Tony, who is this biography for? Where will it appear? Because I think if it’s going to be distributed to the general public then you need to cut back on the technical detail.
Also, I would leave out the bit about indifferent responses to Marie and Jack and concentrate on the positives.

Also, perhaps you need a couple of paragraphs at the start about who you are, not just what you do. What’s your background, where do you live?

Just some quick thoughts.

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